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“The Run ”

by, Nellymoose118



The moon is bright and the night is young,

Care to have a run my friend? Care to have a run?

The stars shine down in the sky,
just like a million pairs of eyes,

Care to have a run my friend? Care to have a run?

A mournful wolf song fills the night air,
it's throughly bellow says,I'm here!

Care to have a run my friend? Care to have a run?

They come on pads so soft and swift,
then eyes shine out from the mist,

Care to have a run my friend? Care to have a run?

White fangs gleam in the moon's silvery sheen,
your heart beets fast as they ask...

Care to have a run my friend? Care to have a run?...

©2007-2009 =Nellymoose118
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Author's Comments

:eyepopping: UGH! I really liked doing this poem but I have NO idea if it's any good or not... You'll just have to make that decision on your own. But please feel free to drop a comment or two. ;p I LOVE comments don'cha know! :D I am going to fix it into a real song one day... That day just hasn't come yet... :XD:

Thanks! :fuzzydemon:

Poem (c) Me :iconnellymoose118:



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:iconelusivedreams07:
Great job. :handshake: Haha. Don't even worry, your poem is awesome! I love it! My favorite line is "a mournful wolf song fills the night air" I think it would make a great song. Good luck fixing it into one! :#1:
:iconnellymoose118:
Awww! Thank-you SO much!!! :hug: I feel so loved... :love:

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Care to have a run my friend?
Care to have a run?
(Read the full poem [link] here. :rose:)
:iconmany-of-me:
Best Poem EVAR!!!!

You're Just Too Cool For Me!

I Love This Line Pair:
They come on pads so soft and swift,
then eyes shine out from the mist,

:+fav::+fav::+fav::+fav::+fav::+fav::+fav:
:iconnellymoose118:
*feels so cool* B-) Thank-you! Thank-you! :bow: Please no applause! No applause! :no: Just throw money :dollarus: ... Preferably LARGE bills because they hurt more... :confused:

MUAAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! :mwahaha:

:fuzzydemon:


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Care to have a run my friend?
Care to have a run?
(Read the full poem [link] here. :rose:)

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